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Contrived! No Writer Wants to Hear That Word

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Dear Aspiring Author, Thank you for submitting your paranormal book proposal to us Although I enjoyed your writing, the plot seemed a little too contrived.  Sincerely yours, Alicia Agent Contrived: create or bring about a situation by deliberate use of skill and artifice. I’ve been watching Shadow and Bone, a fantasy series on Netflick adapted from the Shadow and Bone novels by Leigh Bardugo. Characters from a second series she wrote called The Crow have been interwoven into the storyline. To be honest, while I read all the Shadow and Bone books, I only read the first book of the Crow series as it didn’t appeal to me as much. In the TV series, the writers take a lot of liberties and co-mingled the two story lines. In the second season, the Crows (a merry band of thieves) are tasked with buying or stealing an antique sword. As the scenes dedicated to this endeavor unfold, it’s difficult to believe this is a seasoned band of thieves. Now, I’m not a thief, but one would think the fir