My Dear, I Don't Give A Damn: The Power of Dialogue

If you have a hankering to learn more about writing, don't miss the 2012 Muse Online Writers Conference.

Especially don't miss my workshop
October 8 - 14, 2012

Geared for the new and intermediate writer, My Dear, I Don’t Give A Damn: The Power of Dialogue will focus on ways to incorporate dialogue into scenes to make your story sparkle. Using examples from books and movies, we’ll explore the many purposes of dialogue in storytelling. Check it out at   Muse Online Writers Conference


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